Saturday, October 11, 2008

Poison

I creep through your veins and destroy you from the inside out.  I reach the heart and tear it to pieces.  I am in your head and control your thoughts.  No drugs work, I adapt.  I am a poison to the world.  I damage everything I come in contact with and I am unaffected by the result for I have already moved on to my next victim.  I am hoping they find a cure, it is not much of an existence ruining others lives.

2 comments:

E.F.R. said...

Hey Jax,

I wrote a rather dark poem this week, too ... wanna critique it for me? Let me know if you've got time.

DaleHolt said...

Sean, I do see growth in your work and i am glad to see you writing. I do have comments if you would like to hear them.
take care
Dale